Friday, May 20, 2011

Fair - 77 Fiction

Note:- 77 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of 77 words
Fair


.... 11 pm. 
He was alone in the bus stop.
He was waiting for the last city bus, since an hour, with 10 rupees in his pocket.
He was hungry and tired.
And to his rescue, the bus came but it didnt stop there.
He started running behind the bus.
While he managed to get into the running bus, the bus had stopped suddenly.
He was about to thank the driver, but the driver had stopped it for a gal.


PS : We have fair fares for the fairer gender. Unfair!!!  :)

8 comments:

aativas said...

Maybe he was at the wrong bus-stop. In cities different buses stop at different (and nearby bus-stops!)

Avinash said...

at least he got to meet a girl on a rainy day, late in the evening, and alone.... now it depends on how he uses this opportunity! :) everything is fair in one or the other way... :)

Nethra said...

It's a person from unfair gender doing the unfair business so stop blaming the fairer gender, will you?

Mahesh Aadhya Kalal said...

@Nethra
hey buddy, my blame is on the driver who is a typical Indian male hypocrite ..
i second your point :-) :-) :-)

Mahesh Aadhya Kalal said...

@Aativas
logical point indeed . But the point is about the treatment of genders . Anyways i will be more clearer next time :-)

Mahesh Aadhya Kalal said...

@Avinash
hey dude, pretty optimistic . :-)

Rachana Shakyawar said...

How sweet was the driver :P

Learn something guys! LOLz

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

hmm, happens. But then, men will be men.

Nice read.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete